Sep 30, 2011
My Grandma is a kind old woman. She is now 68 years old. Her hair is long and tidy. She gives hair oil and combs it everyday. She always puts things on the right place. Her clothes are always clean and neat.She lived in my uncle's house.So she makes up her own bed. She cleans up the house. She also cooks her own meal eveyday.
Your text is very good....but you forget to upload your grandma's picture. I asked you to complete the text with a picture... You got 78
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